Arguing about the Matches

Writing a Narrative Story Title: Arguing about  The Matches                                    

author: Um kalthoum el Jaoussi                     type:non-fiction 

                                                        

                Chapter 1 arguing

“Hey!,” Yelled Um Kalthoum, “why are you awake it’s just 12:00 am?,” she asked Zaineb,

“Well, I won’t tell you! Why are you awake?,” asked Zaineb  

“I won’t tell you either!,” said Um Kalthoum turning her head the other way with her arms crossed.

Then they both yelled, “I’m going somewhere to play a match with my friends because I promised them!”

Then they started to argue.  The girls pushed their heads right in front of each other, so their noses were almost touching.  Um, Kalthoum folded her arms and Zaineb put her hands on her hips.

“well guess what do you have a problem with that?” asked Zaineb with an attitude

The girls were very mad at each other but at the same time they were sad

                                      

“No I don’t, cause I’m going too, and you know you can think before saying something because you might do something wrong or say something wrong,” said Um Kalthoum

“You’re right,” said Zaineb.

 

Suddenly Um Kalthoum went close to Zaineb put her hands right in front of her waving them,

“Now! Why do you have friends that I don’t have?,” suddenly said Um Kalthoum

“Ammmmmmm……… because you have friends that I don’t have,” Zaineb said swallowing on her tongue thinking  Um kalthoum would say something wrong or do something to her

“Good point”, said Um kalthoum  

“Now want to go or no”, asked Um kalthoum in a sasi way putting her hands on her hips when she was already ready

“Yah”, said Zaineb getting ready

“Fine I will wait for you downstairs”, said Um kalthoum putting her hands on the wall

5 minutes later Zaineb came downstairs and they sneaked outside so their parents don’t figure out.

                                          

                                                                                           

“Now where is your match?”, asked Um kalthoum just as rude as a mugger.

“Am …………………………..right next to New York city’s big mall?” said Zaineb backing off cause she was scared.

“Good me too”, said Um kalthoum starting to be kind.

                         

      Chapter 2 walking and talking

“Hey, are you mad at me?”, asked Zaineb

“Will we never had different friends I mean it’s not a big problem like it’s not a conflict it’s just a small problem, but good news we found a solution we just solved it!”, said Um kalthoum

“Hey! Do you want to be risk takers and trade places”, asked Zaineb full of excitement

“Yeah sure!”, Said Um kalthoum nervously

“Okay great”, said Zaineb

But what if we suck on the sport and they figure out which one is which said um kalthoum worried

Then suddenly  Zaineb turned her face to word Um kalthoum and stop walking and said,

“You know you don’t have to do it if you don’t want to and plus I promise they won’t figure out you just have to try your best and come down and also we look so alike not even mom and dad can figure out which is which”.

 

       Chapter 3 the Matches

30minutes later Um kalthoum and Zaineb arrived they started practicing until their friends came.

After their friends came they started the matches Zaineb changed places with Um Kalthoum and went to play soccer she was very nervous, and Um kalthoum went and played tennis. Fooooof! The whistle whistled and both matches stared each match had 4 tournaments Zaineb said “yah” ents but they were pretty rough. When it was halftime the girls went and drank water there were talking about how good they were but sadly they had only 5 minutes of a break so they couldn’t talk that much.

 

            Chapter 4  the win

The matches ended the girls went walking happily to each other then they hugged each other and said, “I won!”

Um, kalthoum asked Zaineb, “can we stop in a pretzel place on the way back home?”

“Yah sure”, answered Zaineb surprised because Um kalthoum never asked and they got the pretzel there were walking happily to the house.

 

        Chapter 5 the fight

 

When they went inside ahhhhhhhhh! Suddenly before they went into the house they heard there mom screaming  

“Where are the twins?”, the mom yelled at the dad

“I don’t know I was sleeping the whole time and you know that and you have no right to say that if you have right to say that then give me evidence”, said the dad

“You’re right they might be downstairs eating”, said the mom

“you’re right to let’s go downstairs”, said the dad   

Quigle the girls opened the door with the keys and ran into the kitchen searching for something to eat.

“Hi mom and, dad,” said the girls very happy

“Hi”, said the mom and dad

“Why are you guys awake?”, said the mom

“Oh mom because we were hungry”, said the twins

Ding ding rang the mom phone mom opened her phone and saw a picture of the girls playing

“Girls! Go to your room right this instant”, said mom

The girls were very said they walked sadly up to there room went on their beds and fell asleep.

                             

I hope you enjoyed my story. I put my story here to show you the I learned lots of things I still have to improve more but I am happy because maybe the first time and didn’t do perfectly but next time I will everything that people tell me to improve on It doesn’t make my feelings said it is actually good me so next time I can improve I learned lots of stuff I learned that you should have spaces between a new  paragraph I also learned speech marks and speech mark sentences  I also learend how you should hook the reader in the begging but I didn’t put it I wrote a story ark I learened cilmax,conflict,solve the conflict ,rising actionand I learened more stuff I also learened everthing in the begging won’t be perfect until you keep repeting it to get to the point and maybe there is always something wrong and maybe no.

 

 

Here is a link to my story in the top is my story but if you can’t see clear just press the link to see my story and please tell me in the comments what I have to improve on .and press HERE to get to the link.

                                                              

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