My Persuasive Writing

Hello readers, today you are going to read me persuasive writing About school. I hope you enjoy and agree with me. ENOJY!

School is to short. The school needs to be longer. Students don’t have enough time to learn. The school is not long enough. School is the source of learning and if the school is not long enough then the students don’t have time to learn anything. The school should be longer because the students can spend more time with their friends, have more fun and have more happiness. The periods are longer so they can spend their time on their favorite class, and they can be more independent because they are alone and have more confidence in what they are doing to learn a new thing by themselves.

 

The first reason why the school should be longer because the students can spend more time with their friends. Students should have time with friends because they can have more fun in school and have a lot of things to do with them. The students can also have more respect for their friends. The students can also have happiness with their friends and learn respect for others. The students can also have a great communication with their friends while the school is longer. They can learn to show loyalty to each other. The students can also learn new things while being with their friends. The students can have time making new friends.

 

The second reason why the school should be longer because there is going to be longer periods. The students can have more time in periods, have more learning since the periods are longer or there are new periods. The students can also spend more time in their favorite periods. The students can also learn more things since the school is longer. The students can also have more time to work. The students can also have more time on the periods to finish what they started. The students can also have two lessons in one period.

 

The last reason the school should be longer is that the students can be more independence. The students can learn independence by being more alone because they are learning new things by doing things by themselves. The students can be more independence by doing things by themselves so they learn and they can grow. The students are more alone so there is more time to learn new things. The students have more time in learning than other people doing the things they need.

 

Just imagine if the school is like 3 times longer the students will have more time with their friends, have more longer periods, and learn independence. If you agree with me then WE NEED LONGER SCHOOL DAYS!

If you agree with me comment down and if you don’t agree comment my mistakes and why you don’t agree with me.

 

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Writing Reflection

Writing is one of my favorite subjects because I can write a story in an open world nothing can stop writing because writing is another world.

I want to share the story that I made is a realistic fiction story here is the link so click HERE.  This is my favorite sentence of the story.

“Paul was hiding like a shell the bullies was kicking Paul like a ball.” I like this sentence because it shows the character trait in one line. And this is the editing.

This story is about a person getting bullied and being a bullier. The reason I put this story instead of the others is that I learned when I write realistic fiction there are limits in the other fiction you can write anything you want.

I learned that when you write a book you can write anything you want if it has a great structure it has a plot with a different idea then other books. And I learned when you write there are always limits to writing.