Persuasive Essay 2018


Are you sick of your parents bossing you around? Well show this to your parents so they can stop lying to you to do things, start being more organized about time management and mostly to stop using their phone.

Tick tock, I am late, should I tell you why I am late? Well because my parents were not organised about time management. It is very important that every parent should be organized about them and their kids time management. My first piece of evidence is that when kids grow up they almost always follow in their parents footsteps. So that means if your parents are not organized about time management it is most likely that you will not be organized about your time management. Another example is that kids can start becoming lazy. One time I had swim class that started at 4:15. At 3:55 my mom said that we have loads of time before you start swimming. Another piece of evidence is that kids will start leaving things to the last minute. Let’s think about homework. If kids need to bring back their homework on a Sunday they probably do it on Saturday. So that’s why all parents should be organized about them and their kids time management

Are you sick of your parents practically lying to you to do things, well I am for multiple reasons. My first piece of evidence is that kids can actually believe it and cry or get scared. I know this by personal experience. My mom had once told my sister when she was little that if she did not eat her vegetables she would lose all her toys and your siblings will never talk or play with you. In addition to this is when they grow up they might still believe in those which can also lead them to be scared about what they do. Something similar to this is that they might actually think that those things are real, and they will start to feel that they are forced to do those things. My mom had once told me that her friends mom told her children that if they wouldn’t clean their room people will start making fun of them and you will have bad luck. Until this day they still clean not only their room but their whole house. Surprisingly when they she came to my house she cleaned  our whole house. This is not a coincidence because she is my moms closest friend. So that’s what happens when your parents lie to you to do things.

Although parents should start being organized about time management and stop lying to their children to do things they should especially stop using their phone. They should stop using their phone because it will encourage kids to spend more time on their phone or devices. Especially when the parents tell their children to leave their phone at the dinner table and two minutes later the child sees its mom or dad glancing over at their phone and slowly picking it up, and finally after hours of sitting and staring on their phone they put it down.  Another piece of evidence is that they can get very distracted very easily which can lead to serious injury. It can also lead to sickness. This recently happened to my friend. Her mom said it was because she used her phone to much, and when I asked her why she used her phone to much she said that she tried to act like her mom. So parents you should always and I mean always spend less time on their phone.

Now that you know about the importance of a parents example to their children, then spread all the reasons to your friends and family for the hope of them setting a good example to their children. If you are a child show this to your parents. But if you are a parent remember this and know that your children want to copy you and if you do not set a good example your child will probably set a bad example to their children. Now go off child explore the world and remember even if your parents do not organize their time management better, lie to you, or maybe even use their phone to much you should always set a good example to everyone. So just imagine a perfect life when your young and older. So go ahead and set a good example to your children.


I Love Camelbak Water Bottles

“CRASH!” That is the sound of your water bottle breaking. You should try Camelbaks water bottles. They are amazing. I love Camelbak water bottles because, there are different types of them, they have good advertising, and they have a lot of sizes, let me tell you more.

Maybe I don’t want a water bottle that has a drinking hole. Or a twist cap. Well that is okay because Camelbak has a variety of different types of water bottles. For example, a straw, a drinking hole, a twist cap, and a leak proof water bottle of each one of those. As I am saying this I am realizing that I have a lot of choices to choose from and I always go for one of the straw ones that are leak proof, because personally those are my favorite so I always go for them. I remember when I had a different brand water bottle and they only had one type of water bottle which was a drinking hole,i got drenched in minutes. I know that it’s not my clumsiness because it happened to almost all of my friends. Personally I think that they can get very messy. I think that having different types of  water bottles are really important is because everyone is different and likes different things. I know that one of my friends loves Camelbaks drinking hole water bottles. I remember when me and my friend were about to start school and we needed to go shopping for school supplies. We went to millions of stores before we actually found a perfect water bottle. Most of the stores we went to only had one type of water bottles which was a twist cap. But that was not the case when I stumbled by Camelbak. I was amazed to see different types of water bottles. I was especially shocked to see they had a leak proof and a spill proof one. Now I realize that Camelbak has a larger variety of water bottles than I thought.

Now that you know that Camelbak has different types of water bottles, you should also know that they have good and honest advertising. My current water bottle from Camelbak has advertising all over the water bottle. Camelbak has many different suppliers one of them are eddy. It is very rare to find a Camelbak bottle without a supplier. But when they do they also advertise that company. They advertise it at the bottom of the water bottle. At the bottom of the water bottle it says Camelbak, and underneath it is their supplier. Why I love this is because it lets people know that their suppliers  also have good water bottles. When they have a supplier they will always put their logo. Unlike other water bottles they have advertising multiple times on the water bottle other water bottles have advertising one time on the water bottle. As I am thinking about this I am realizing that no one really pays attention to the advertising for the suppliers. But even if people don’t pay attention to the supplier advert. Camelbak still are honest and at least put the companies name and logo. That is why they have good and honest advertising.

Tall or short, Camelbak has got it all. Maybe you are looking for a tall water bottle, a short water bottle, or maybe even an exact 750ml water bottle. If you are a person that does not drink a lot of water you will like this. Camelbak sells a variety of water bottle sizes.If you do not drink a lot of water you can get their biggest size. 750ml and at the end of the day you can see how much you have drank. Why I find this useful, is because I live in Dubai, and in Dubai it is really hot, so I usually never even think about water. I just play and swim. It is not only useful to me but also useful to my mom because she can judge if I have drank a lot of water.  Either way tall and short water bottles are amazing.

Gulp! Gulp! I love drinking from my Camelbak water bottles because, they have a variety of different types of them, they have good and honest advertising and because they have a lot of sizes. I am 100% sure if you ever see me you will for sure see me drinking from my Camelbak water bottle, because I love Camelbak water bottles.

UAS National Day Celebration

November 29th the morning when UAS students dress up in colors of the UAE flag. Hear at  UAS we take National Day seriously we all dress up and even have a fair find out more by reading this post and subscribing to my blog to receive  an email every time I post.

The fair is one of the biggest things we do for National Day we bring money and enjoy the wonderful feeling of happiness rush through there body at the same time they are drinking an ice cold slushy that soon enough will give them a brain freeze.


After I came back from the fair I felt the feeling of joy rush through my body like a volcano before it erupts. That is what happened  at our National Day!!!