float

I liked the book float because the boy got a paper plane at the end.This what happend in the story the boy had a paper bout and it was raining and the street was flooded so the boy was driveing the boat all around the street. It was flowing for a while but then it got stuck in a sewer  the boy came home sad but his dad chered him up and made him a paper air plane and that was the end of the story.I would change that I think that there should be some words.I think he wrote this because he was felling sad

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