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Kung Fu Championships
Jackson went to train but the bullies want to get rid of him and want him out.When training finished Jackson left and the bullies followed him everywhere.Jackson stopped at a dead end.The bullies found him,took his training bag and started arguing.Once they got rid of him they left and he was hurt.
After a few days Jackson was having a nice day but suddenly he saw the bullies again they were as quick as cheetah. He wanted to stand up for himself this time he had an idea. He splashed dirty water on the bullies and ran away. The bad thing was that they got him once again and the bullies said, “ you are fast,not fast enough.” The bullies got really mad and injured him, he didn’t like it.
After that there was a man who came and his name was Mr.Han. Then he became Jackson’s new friend because he saved him from the bullies and healed him he was as smart as a calculator. Then he helped him practice more. After two weeks he tried the challenge and Jackson wouldn’t give up. The challenge was to do a perfect split on a tower and to do a high kick to touch a bell. Later on he knew how to do it and he was ready for the championships.
The problem is that Jackson’s focus was still not good enough. Mr.Han yelled, “You still can’t go to the kung fu Championships! ‘’ It took three weeks for him to get his focus properly. Once he got his focus properly and he was really ready for the kung fu championships.
Jackson’s problem was finally solved he entered the kung fu championships! The first round he was
Against Zhong. Jackson was stressed and was scared,he lost the first point but there is two rounds each. The second round Jackson won so it was a tie breaker! Since it was a tie breaker they got an extra round. Jackson was not shy anymore and beat Zhong. “ Hooray,” yelled the mom.
After Jackson’s fight, he saw the bullies fight, and he felt bad for the other people because the bullies teacher is evil, and tells them to do bad things to other people. The bullies entered the semifinals already. Jackson had to beat Yang to also go to the semi finals and he did. “Yay!,” shouted the crowd.
When somebody enters the semi finals there is three rounds to win against the first opponent. He was happy he wasn’t the first opponent. The first two opponents were Cheng and Yang. A few rounds later Yang got injured but Cheng still won and entered the FINALS!! Afterward the two opponents were Jackson and Yang Jackson had to win this or else after 1 minute and 30 seconds Cheng and Yang will go the finals. Jackson had to really focus. The first round he lost and same for the second. Luckily the third and fourth round, the last round was tricky though he still WON!!!!
Whoever wins this round will win the championships,Jackson vs Cheng suddenly Jackson won all the rounds he aced it. “ The winner is Jackson,” said the manager. Jackson tried his best he finally knew the secret power and the bullies learned their lesson to have good friends. One year later everyone knew Jackson was a kung fu master. He was really popular in is school now that people wanted to be like him.
Since people wanted to be like him he became a new kung fu teacher in the school and taught people all the things Mr.Han taught him. After a long time everyone that wanted to learn to be like Jackson were fantastic and then they became a team for another kung fu championships. After one year there was another kung fu championships everyone was happy and were ready.
Da da da da da da. The next kung fu championships started and the leader of the dragon fighters was Ching Chong. He was going to fight first for his team. He was against Calvo his own enemy. Ching Chong wanted to battle as good as he can and he wanted to do the secret power that Jackson did. He attempted to do it luckily Calvo fell down, KO KO! Ching Chong knocked him down straight away. If Ching Chong knocks Jerome down then he will enter the semifinals suddenly he did. He entered the semifinals.
Though nobody was there so he automatically won!! He had the nicest day ever.
This is my story and I want to tell you about my story. I learned about how to plan for a story. For example I used a story arc to plan my story. I used the story arc because it helps me to add the exposition, problem, climax, rising action and the ending/conclusion.
I could improve my story by editing it more and write more important things. I think I was a good enough writer for the story because I was writing nice things. I was also a good enough typer because I was typing my story fast enough so then I have good time management.
My favorite part of my story was the climax and the rising action and that was when they started the kung fu championships. I think I could have removed the unimportant parts and changed some things or edited.